# Gitmeeda in Sen Cal Kapimi: Creating and Sustaining Suspense within the Romantic Comedy Genre
Those who watch romantic comedies will agree that the
storyline of Sen Cal Kapimi is neither unique nor rare. A pretend engagement? A
repressed hero? Class differences? A difficult family? An ex-girlfriend or
boyfriend? Misunderstandings galore? Love stories have been written in
different languages the world over, with all these themes, for centuries.
Those who follow this genre will agree that there is a 98% guarantee that the hero and the heroine will walk into the sunset, holding hands to a happily ever after. We don’t complain even as it features a combination of soulful moments, heart-wrenching dialogues, and passionate yearnings between a couple, celebrated over and over again. The predictability of a well written romantic comedy keeps us in a safe bubble, with the comforting inside knowledge that all will be well at the end of the day. Thus, unpredictability or suspense is not exactly the X-factor of a rom-com. So, when you see the furore over the possibility of Eda leaving Serkan in Episode 11 it seems unprecedented. The audience who knows the formula of the genre going delirious over the possibility of a separation!
Will she or won’t she? #gitmeeda was trending at 7
worldwide on Twitter, and not just within Turkey before the release of Episode 11.
The build-up and the ad-hoc climax of Episode 11 makes one appreciate
the diamond brilliance of Ayse Kutlu and her team- Erdem Açikgöz, Yesim Citak,
and Dilek Iyigün. By treating the first phase of the Serkan-Eda relationship with
an independent story arc, the makers cleverly keep the viewers on their toes as millions of people frantically tried to guess whether or not Eda will leave to Italy
at the expense of Serkan’s heart. So far, creating suspense in a romantic
comedy and sustaining it has been wielded as an art form in Sen Cal Kapimi.
How did the makers of SCK structure its plot to cunningly
generate a frenzy among the audience for a climax that was not really a climax?
Sen Cal Kapimi took its viewers through a journey that started with intrigue,
moved through conflicts and misunderstandings, which ended in the climactic
kiss leaving the audience gushing and cheering in Episode 11.
In this blog, I would like to use Freytag’s Pyramid and
critique the plot of the first eleven episodes of SCK as a part of a separate
story within the larger narrative arc. Amazingly enough, it looks to me like the actual story is starting only now! We are about to find out what happens when
someone knocks on your door.
According to Freytag’s Pyramid, at the Exposition, we see
the characters and the setting introduced. We see Serkan’s arrival from London;
and frantic reactions from the employees, while on the other side, there is a
grumpy and disappointed Eda carrying the fertilizer sacks to the Nursery. Eda
and Serkan have their first explosive meeting at the university, and the mood
is set. All of the secondary characters are introduced and we start experiencing the
thrill of an Eda-Serkan chemistry. Their first kiss is called an Inciting
action- an incident in the plot without which there is no story to tell.
The second stage is the Rising action: these are a series
of incidents leading up to the Climax. We understand the character-motivations during
this time, as the couples’ pretend engagement creates situations that up the
dramatic ante of the plot. The scenes at the engagement party where Serkan and
Eda are under everyone’s scrutiny; the nearly revealed contract by Selin; and
the almost successful attempts by Kahn to destroy them are all part of the
Rising action. As the intensity of the Rising action increases, the audience
becomes anxious and frustrated for the Climax. Here is where the strength of the narrative is tested. A lack of rationality, common sense,
creativity, and imagination in the Rising action stage can lead to a dissatisfactory
climax. We see this in some of the stories that have a resounding start and
then fail to retain our attention as it manufactures obstacles and events
that the protagonists attempt to surmount. In such cases, the audience gradually
stops caring about their success or failure, and viewership declines with only
the ardent fans remaining as audience. In contrast, in SCK, as Eda and Serkan
grew increasingly frustrated, disturbed, and upset, the audience started
projecting their emotions, experiencing the angst of the protagonists as their
own.
Episodes nine and ten in SCK were building up to a
turning point, which is the third stage of the Pyramid, the Climax. In these
episodes, Eda is systematically pushed to a corner where she feels helpless and insecure as Serkan does not open up, and seemingly chooses Selin over
Eda. The breaking point for Eda comes in Episode eleven, where Serkan’s mother
tells Eda to leave her son to Selin, and we see Eda go to the airport.
Meanwhile, Serkan also undergoes turbulence throughout the ninth and tenth
episodes as he thinks he does not have the power to stop Eda from leaving. His
fears and repressed emotions do not help him be a charming romantic hero. He
has to overcome his inner demons as well as the opinions of the two women he
trusts the most to have his back: his mother and Selin. He goes against his
logic at the final moments of the episode and chases Eda, stops her, and kisses
her. A staple, cliched romantic scene at the backdrop of the Istanbul sunset
that becomes exquisite because of the powerful portrayal of the Climax and the
emotional investment of the audience.
The creators of the story know what they are doing, and
this Climax is by no means the end, but the beginning.
The success of this serial has been its ability to engage
its audience, seducing them into making an emotional commitment. According to Freytag’s Pyramid, the fourth stage is the
Falling action: the consequences of Eda and Serkan’s kiss in the Climax, will
be dealt with during this phase. Their own acceptance of the Climactic events,
as well as others’ reactions to their togetherness, will be seen in Episode 12. Her aunt, his mother, their friends- everyone will have a word with them, not to forget Serkan stood up Selin to stop Eda.
In the final stage, according to Freytag, we witness the
Denouement: the phase where one story arc ends, and in SCK’s case, a new one
begins. Unlike in romantic comedies, in a Tragedy, this is Catastrophic, as the
hero meets with a terrible end. However, Ayse is treating these first 13
episodes as an independent unit that is not constrained by the limitations of
the comic ending. Hence, Serkan and Eda will definitely go through a
Catastrophic experience. A heartbreak is imminent, considering that Serkan’s
father seemed to have played an indirect role in Eda’s parents’ untimely
deaths. If this Catastrophe is dealt with in the immediate future, we will
enter the second phase of Sen Cal Kapimi starting fresh from the Exposition of
the Freytag's Pyramid. This is challenging and complicated and could remain unresolved
for a long time. So exciting times are ahead that could make or break Sen Cal
Kapimi as we continue our journey of experiencing romantic love in all its
glory.
Interesting observation! i am not familiar iwth Freytag's Pyramid but i agree with his format of story telling. Though the first 11 episodes can be a stand alone kind of a story, with heroine hating hero, fake engagement, working together, getting to know and slowly falling for each other, ex girl friend waiting in the wings, hero slowly opening up and falls hard for the heroine - typical romance story. 11 th episode ends with confession and a kiss. As per our romantic genre, it shd go with and they lived happily ever after.
ReplyDeleteBut the whole fan groups know the story starts now. We all know the pair is going to be separated, face problems and then will get back together again. What i liked with the story of the foregrounding the author did. the hints given throughout the 11 episodes that hint to us about the simmering emotions which is not visible right now. Now we know Serkan's dad was indirectly responsible for Eda's parents' death! it is going to impact their relationship! Parents mistakes, children are the ones who end up as victims.
Eda's grandmother is another enigma who is not preferred by both Eda n her aunt. But circumstances force Ayfer to call this chr. We dont know what this grandmother is capable of. Khaan, may be becos of the vanishing actor, character too vanished. Ferit is slowly turning grey. I wonder will Selin also turn negative when faced by serkan's love for Eda? that is another one sub track!
Fifi and her mystery! will Eda be able to accept if Fifi turns out to be a spy? i will be upset because i am loving the bond the girls share in this show. i dont want that to be compromised.
with so many hints galore, we all know story is just starting! imagine if a show fans feel tht in epi 12 story is going to start afresh, how excited will we all feel?
I too am excited to see the journey of Eda n Serkan and the obstacles they are going to face. It is going to be a bumpy ride, but as you said, we know for sure they will be ending up happily ever after. so lets enjoy the ride!